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In the sun
the boys play football
the sky blues
play at home
against the claret and blues;
Sunday league football.
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by Scooj
My first shadorma.
League
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In the sun
the boys play football
the sky blues
play at home
against the claret and blues;
Sunday league football.
.
by Scooj
My first shadorma.
Natural adventures 
Congrats on your first shadorma! Very nice. I may try that out someday.
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I am not quite in the swing of it. The three syllable bits lend themselves to a lyrical lilt that I like.
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Lyrical lilt… your words roll around on my tongue like hard candy.
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That sounds like a good thing.
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It feels good, too.
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Aha! I didn’t see this yesterday, or I would have said something. I like it!
The reference to both sun and sky paints a nice bright picture, even without the photo. I agree about those three syllable lines, they’re nice and concise and song-like.
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Now I have got that one out of the way, I can start to be more thoughtful with them.
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