Jack came back last night,
his ice grip suffocating
Eostre’s late tenure.
by Scooj
Bugger – original version had a goofy syllable count. I have edited it now, but it doesn’t flow as well.
Bloody freezing
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Jack came back last night,
his ice grip suffocating
Eostre’s late tenure.
by Scooj
Bugger – original version had a goofy syllable count. I have edited it now, but it doesn’t flow as well.
Natural adventures 
Bloody good haiku! I loved that Eostre is mentioned, as well. Ah, I’m swooning!!
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Thank you. I like the Eostre bit, but am unhappy with the form of the last line. Having said that, I think it is important to go with the Haiku that happens. Over-engineering can ruin them.
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I thought it was excellent.
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Thank you again.
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