In my head, nothing
overpowering dullness
total vacuum
by Scooj
The only good thing about this dreadful haiku is that I found out that vacuum has three sylables.
In my head, nothing
overpowering dullness
total vacuum
by Scooj
The only good thing about this dreadful haiku is that I found out that vacuum has three sylables.
Tomorrow is always another day
Get an early night and put your best foot forward tomorrow morning . . .
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I’ll try, although I blew the early night bit.
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Hope you’ve had a really good day today . . .
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Thank you. Not too bad, and both England won the rugby and Arsenal the football, so I had a feel good factor this evening. Work tomorrow though. Boo.
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Lol. I always thought vacuum had 2 syllables.
Not entirely void; you wrote a rather depressing but excellently composed haiku😉
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Thank you. On re-reading it, it seems better than when I wrote it… probably because you said kind things about it.
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