I am Stephen. I live in Bristol, UK. I decided to shorten my profile...to this: Wildlife, haiku, travel, streetart, psychogeography and my family. Not necessarily in that order.
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You are right. I am lazy with punctuation in Haiku, kind of deliberately, to offer alternative stories. I think in this case, a comma would have been helpful.
Natural adventures 
No ice cream and cake for you ? Lucky dog
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The cake was mine.
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The lack of a comma threw me off.. it reads like”dog ice cream” and cake
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You are right. I am lazy with punctuation in Haiku, kind of deliberately, to offer alternative stories. I think in this case, a comma would have been helpful.
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Well alternatively speaking the dog took advantage of your birthday 😅
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😁
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