Bloody freezing

 

Jack came back last night,

his ice grip suffocating

Eostre’s late tenure.

 

by Scooj

 

Bugger – original version had a goofy syllable count. I have edited it now, but it doesn’t flow as well.

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I am Stephen. I live in Bristol, UK. I decided to shorten my profile...to this: Wildlife, haiku, travel, streetart, psychogeography and my family. Not necessarily in that order.

4 thoughts on “Bloody freezing”

    1. Thank you. I like the Eostre bit, but am unhappy with the form of the last line. Having said that, I think it is important to go with the Haiku that happens. Over-engineering can ruin them.

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