Limerick 2

 

I’ve struggled at times to articulate

the science of matters particulate

quantum physics is not

a pursuit that I’ve got

any time for or wish to consolidate.

 

by Scooj

 

That’s enough limericks for a while.

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I am Stephen. I live in Bristol, UK. I decided to shorten my profile...to this: Wildlife, haiku, travel, streetart, psychogeography and my family. Not necessarily in that order.

5 thoughts on “Limerick 2”

    1. You have obviously been there before. I am learning. I enjoyed the first two lines so much, but you are right, I painted myself into a corner. A bit more practice…and more carefully chosen rhyming words.

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      1. Your ambition was to be admired! I often take the easy way out with rhymes in the haiku, but with other poetic forms you’ve got to stretch yourself and experiment.

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