I’ve struggled at times to articulate
the science of matters particulate
quantum physics is not
a pursuit that I’ve got
any time for or wish to consolidate.
by Scooj
That’s enough limericks for a while.
I’ve struggled at times to articulate
the science of matters particulate
quantum physics is not
a pursuit that I’ve got
any time for or wish to consolidate.
by Scooj
That’s enough limericks for a while.
Limericks are terrific!
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Certainly fun to do, but more difficult than meets the eye.
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Tricky one! The end rhymes are good, but you left yourself nowhere to go trying to rhyme with articulate. Very good, nonetheless.😉
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You have obviously been there before. I am learning. I enjoyed the first two lines so much, but you are right, I painted myself into a corner. A bit more practice…and more carefully chosen rhyming words.
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Your ambition was to be admired! I often take the easy way out with rhymes in the haiku, but with other poetic forms you’ve got to stretch yourself and experiment.
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